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Paint my bitter face and brittle frown
With the sweetest sight
Of the softest snow cascading down
Upon this wintry English night

For I have never had the rarer chance
On solemn nights as these
To see the tumbling raindrop dance
As the snow upon this breeze

And plunging hailstones never seemed so clear
Or peaceful in the air
As I gazed beyond a deforming tear
And brands they bid me bear

The roads and roses fade in slumber
Under ghostly sheathes
As the heavens way and sway asunder
As the drifting starlight weaves

No, I never saw a soothing splendour
From such celestial height
As the softest snow cascading down
Upon this wintry English night
©2008-2009 ~autumn-cannibal
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I love it ... the imagary is amazing

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One word cannot really describe what I think of this so I'm just going to throw a whole bunch of nice things your way - I think this poem is beautiful, expressive, creative, amazing, wonderful - I can't think of anymore ^^; Mr Sam, this is truely excellent - the imagery is just mind blowning! :+favlove: :)

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oh thats pretty

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"it seems to me most strange that men should fear, seeing that death, a necessary end, will come when it will come."
Dude! :D

Absolutely sensational poetry, my friend. You've outdone yourself this time.
Everything is perfect and you never cease to amaze. Great job!

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Thank you :)

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Aw thats very kind of you to say so

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Thanks

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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it

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Not kind but honest, I say mostly what I think and I honestly think this is beautiful :)

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Brilliant... where i was it was snowing over easter, it idint settle but it was very beautiful. as is this poem

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